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Strengthen Your Story with One Quick Fix by Karin Beery

Freelance editor and prepubbed author, Karin Beery, shares a pet peeve of many editors, including me, and shows how to fix it.

Writing wisdom for the wise writer. Take heed …

Today I didn’t go to the zoo. I didn’t jump out of an airplane. I didn’t compose a symphony, skip stones across the lake, commit a crime, build a snowman, get married, draw a picture, or milk a cow. I didn’t even buy a new pair of shoes. I could fill pages with details of all the things I didn’t do, but that’s not very interesting, is it?

Then why do novelists continue to talk about what their characters didn’t do?

One of the things I often see when I’m editing is an explanation of what’s not happening. For example,

The redhead walked by, her skirt swaying. Bobby wanted to ask her out, but he didn’t.

Sue stared out the window. She thought about going outside, but she didn’t.

Mr. Smith pulled into the driveway and sighed. He could have driven to Canada, faked his death, and married a 19-year-old cocktail waitress, but he didn’t.

I understand the motivation behind this kind of writing—to show the struggle between the characters’ desires and their realities—but it doesn’t actually help readers connect with the characters or reveal information about them. In fact, it pulls readers out of the moment to tell them something they can already see (we know Bobby didn’t ask her out because we see that he didn’t).

Instead, show what the characters are doing. Bobby’s not asking the girl out, so what’s really going on in his head?

The redhead walked by, her skirt swaying. Bobby wanted to ask her out, but instead he smiled, plotting his next “accidental” meeting.

Sue stared out the window. She thought about going outside, dreaming of the cool breeze tickling her skin. But the thrill of the fresh air couldn’t push back the panic rising in her chest—she needed the security of four sturdy walls.

Mr. Smith pulled into the driveway and sighed, forcing the wedding band back onto his finger.

Not only do these alternatives show what the characters are doing, they encourage the reader to keep reading so they can find out why the characters did those things. How many times has Bobby “accidentally” walked by the redhead? Why is Sue afraid to go outside? What’s going on in Mr. Smith’s life that he takes off his wedding ring when he’s away from the house?

When you show what the characters are doing instead of telling what they’re not doing, you pull the reader deeper into your story. You strengthen that connection and give readers a reason to keep reading. The next time you edit your manuscript, look for those places where you focus on the “didn’t.” By quickly refocusing to the “doing,” you can strengthen your story and keep your readers engaged!


Bio:

Karin Beery – Writer. Editor. Novelist. Karin writes contemporary fiction with a healthy dose of romance. When she’s not writing fiction, she’s editing or writing business copy through her business Write Now Editing & Copywriting Services. And when she’s not doing either of those, she teaches Substantive Editing for Fiction and Romance Editing through the PEN Institute. You can connect with her on Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, or at her website, www.karinbeery.com.

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Distribution–Indie Style

This past weekend, I attended an event that benefited both local readers and their surrounding libraries. I took with me a catalog from the Christian Small Publishers Association (CSPA), in which only one of my books was listed, basically because seven of us went together to buy the ad. I can’t see spending that much on an ad by myself.

But the catalog got me to thinking: I should create a sell sheet of all my publications so I can distribute them around to area libraries and businesses. The idea isn’t new, but this weekend, I got to see how it would be beneficial.

Here’s what I have in mind:

  • Create and produce an eye-catching brochure.

I want a professional-looking brochure that includes all my covers and write-ups about each novel, plus the ISBNs. I’ll include my bio and author pic. I’m thinking of a tri-fold with blank space open for the mailing information.

  • Make sure all my titles are listed with IngramSpark.

Or some other distributor—but the operative word is distributor. One of the things people forget is that Amazon is a retailer. Their distribution is basically to their own cyber-retail outlets. Retailers and librarians don’t buy from other retailers.

Ingram is a distributor. Retailers and librarians can look up the ISBNs (which had better not be supplied by CreateSpace or any other Amazon printer) on the Ingram site and order books from them at a discounted price.

Thanks to author Angela Breidenbach’s patient explanations, I have a better understanding of how to work Ingram.

First, forget about making a lot of money on it, unless you’re a huge name. Since I’m not well known, I have to offer a steep discount—55%—plus the return option if my books don’t sell.

Next, I crank the price up two to three dollars over my Amazon retail price. I don’t dare go up too high, but 55% off of $14.99 leaves me only $6.75, out of which Ingram gets paid a percentage, which means I don’t get much. Not that I would anyway, but setting the price at $16.99 helps. When I get more comfortable with this, I may dare to go higher. I mean, if those buying the books from Ingram get 55% off of a risk-free purchase, they shouldn’t complain too much.

Finally, I make sure all the prices (including international prices) end with the .99. Not sure why it matters internationally, but Angie assured me it does. As for the good ol’ U.S. of A., $X.99 is where the sales tax used to change. So, if you sold a book at $15.00, the sales tax (in Texas, it would be $0.94) would be higher than at $14.99. A slight difference, but a perceived advantage. These days, the charge is a flat rate, but the perception of savings remains.

  • Send/deliver the brochures to libraries and retail stores.

I’ve been fortunate enough to work a couple of library events where local librarians with expense accounts purchase books directly from the authors. Believe me, it’s a wonderful experience. But there are so many more libraries around—not to mention retailers!

For a price, Ingram will put your release in their catalog and get it before the eyes of those who buy for their stores and libraries. If you can do that, you should. I’m not at a point where I can yet; hence my idea of designing a brochure.

For libraries, my idea would work great. I don’t know that publication date matters to them quite as much as it does to retailers. But with so many new releases each day, I don’t expect to compete for retail space in bookstores. Even my newest is part of a series where the original pub date of the first was 2011. Of course, I repubbed it in 2016, but we’re halfway through 2018 already, and that book is old.

This is the time to think outside of the box and pitch the book to different kinds of retailers. Since I’m in Texas, a state of admittedly huge egos, then I can pitch to stores that specialize in Texas gifts and keepsakes. I write a lot of western fiction, so western stores would work. I write Christian fiction, so Christian retailers and church libraries would work. In other words, I have alternatives to bookstores, and I bet you do too.

Final Word:

I’m not saying I expect 100% success, that retailers will jump to their keyboards immediately upon receiving the brochure and buy my books, but I think it’s worth a shot. I will say this: the return on investment is likely to stink. This is about visibility, not profit. The cost of the brochure plus postage might not be covered by sales when the buyer gets a 55% discount and free returns. But I could be wrong. If Ingram gets enough orders for my books to cover even my costs, not just their own, this may be the most profitable enterprise I’ve ever entered with this business. We’ll see.

Stay tuned.

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99c Sale on Give the Lady a Ride!

On sale on Kindle until midnight June 17

Read the first scene on my website, Linda W. Yezak.

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Adventures at the 2018 Blueberry Festival

Something happened this year that really opened my eyes to the value of fans.

For the past several years, my little “Canopy Bookstore” has had the same location at the festival, close to the heart of the main drag. This year, for reasons I have yet to understand, my friend and fellow author, Mary Hamilton, and I got moved to a side street. I’m not saying we didn’t do well. Just not as good as last year.

While there are lags at every event, there are also wonderful bursts of sales activities that keep you busy and thankful for the next few moments of inactivity. Since we were on a side street, there were fewer “bursts” and fewer browsers to lure to our booth.

But some of my true fans actually hunted me down. “I’ve been looking for you all over!” became my favorite comment of the day. The fact that they found me taught me how gratifying and humbling it is to have fans. Some of those who hunted for me have read every single book. They come back every year to see what new adventure I published for them. One of them praised my writing with such enthusiasm and such volume that she drew the attention of a couple of customers visiting the booth next to ours. Those two alone bought four books.

It’s fun knowing my books are read, but discovering that I have fans waiting for my releases year after year amazes me. I feel so blessed and humbled.

If you’re one of them, thank you!

 

 

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Newest Christian Titles for June!

More in-depth descriptions of these books can be found on the ACFW Fiction Finder website.

 

Contemporary Romance:

The Sleuth’s Miscalculation by Kimberly Rose Johnson — Librarian Nancy Daley loves a good mystery and enjoys moonlighting as a consultant for the sheriff’s department. When license plates go missing in Tipton County, she’s on the case. But she’s been partnered with the new deputy, Carter Malone, and he’s not interested in her help. When the minor case they are working morphs into something more, things quickly go from harmless to scary. Can they solve the mystery before it’s too late, and more importantly, what will they do about their growing attraction? (Contemporary Romance from Mountain Brook Ink)

Falling for the Cowgirl by Tina Radcliffe — Hiring Amanda “AJ” McAlester as his assistant at the Big Heart Ranch isn’t foreman Travis Maxwell’s first choice—but his sisters insist she’s perfect for the job. And AJ’s determined to prove she’s just as qualified as any man. But with money on the line, AJ and her innovative ideas could put him at risk of losing everything…including his heart. (Contemporary Romance from Love Inspired [Harlequin])

Enduring Love by Toni Shiloh — Belle Peterson is hiding a secret. Seeking sanctuary in the small town of Maple Run, she’s intent on starting her life over—one she hopes honors Christ. The plan was going great until an undeniable attraction to Micah Campbell has her wondering if she’s changed at all. Can love really conquer all or will Belle’s past be too much for Micah to handle? (Contemporary Romance from Celebrate Lit)

General Contemporary:

A Firm Place to Stand by Lori Altebaumer — Out of options, Maribel takes a safe enough seeming job, but soon finds herself in the middle of a murder, a search for a missing girl, and a race to find a lost treasure. (General Contemporary, Independently Published)

Kuwaiti Seeker by Jim Carroll — A young Kuwaiti Muslim searches for truth in Islam, but God finds him anyway. (General Contemporary, Crosslink Publishing)

 

General Historical:

Where the Fire Falls by Karen Barnett — Watercolorist Olivia Rutherford has shed her humble beginnings to fashion her image as an avant-garde artist to appeal to the region’s wealthy art-collectors. When she lands a lucrative contract painting illustrations of Yosemite National Park for a travel magazine, including its nightly one-of-a-kind Firefall event, she hopes the money will lift Olivia and her sisters out of poverty. After false accusations cost him everything, former minister Clark Johnson has found purpose as a backcountry guide in this natural cathedral of granite and trees. Now he’s faced with the opportunity to become a National Parks Ranger, but is it his true calling? As Clark opens Olivia’s eyes to the wonders of Yosemite, she discovers the people are as vital to the park’s story as its vistas–a revelation that may bring her charade to an end. (General Historical from Waterbrook/Multnomah [Random House])

Historical Romance:

Orphan Train Sweetheart by Mollie Campbell — Spring Hill is the orphan train’s last stop—a final chance for Simon McKay to find homes for his young charges. When his fellow placing agent quits, Simon enlists help from the frontier town’s pretty schoolteacher. Cecilia Holbrook is as intriguing as she is independent, yet Simon’s devotion to his mission will soon call him back to New York. Long overshadowed by her flirtatious sister, Cecilia is done with waiting for a man to choose her. She’s already fighting the school board to keep her position. Now she’s struggling not to lose her heart to Simon. Could their shared concern for the children show them how to follow a new dream, together? (Historical Romance Love Inspired [Harlequin])

A Love Restored by Kelly Goshorn — She was nothing like the woman he’d envisioned for his bride, but he was everything she’d ever dreamed of-until a promise from his past threatened their future. (Historical Romance from Pelican Book Group)

The Road to Magnolia Glen by Pam Hillman — In 1792, Quinn O’Shea leaves Ireland for Natchez, Mississippi, ready to force his oldest brother to reclaim the role of family guardian so Quinn can be free to pursue his own adventures. While aboard ship, a run-in with tenacious yet kind Kiera Young and her two Irish sisters lands him in the role of reluctant savior. Upon arriving in the colonies, Kiera realizes her intended groom never existed and a far more sinister deal has been negotiated for her and her sisters. Quinn offers to escort his charges safely to Breeze Hill Plantation and his brother’s care, fully intending to seek his freedom elsewhere. But the longer he remains, the greater his feelings toward Kiera grow and the more he comes to realize true freedom might be found in sacrifice. (Historical Romance from Tyndale House)

A Defense of Honor by Kristi Ann Hunter — When Katherine “Kit” FitzGilbert turned her back on London society more than a decade ago, she determined never to set foot in a ballroom again. But when business takes her to London and she’s forced to run for her life, she stumbles upon not only a glamorous ballroom but also Graham, Lord Wharton. Graham, intent on finding his friend’s missing sister, is convinced Kit knows more about the girl than she’s telling. After meeting Graham, Kit finds herself wishing things could have been different, but long ago, she dedicated herself to helping women escape the same scorn that drove her from London and raising the innocent children caught in the crossfire. As much as she desperately wishes to tell Graham everything, revealing the truth isn’t worth putting him and everyone she loves in danger. (Historical Romance from Bethany House [Baker])

More Than Meets the Eye by Karen Witemeyer — Many consider Evangeline Hamilton cursed. Orphaned at a young age and possessing a pair of mismatched eyes–one bright blue, the other dark brown–Eva has fought to find her way in a world that constantly rejects her. She’s made a safe haven with Seth and Zach, two former orphans she now counts as brothers. Seeking justice against the gambler who stole his birthright and destroyed his family, Logan Fowler arrives in 1880s Pecan Gap, Texas, to confront Zach Hamilton, the hardened criminal responsible for his father’s death. Instead, he discovers a man not much older than himself with an unusual family. When Zach’s sister, Evangeline, insists on dousing Logan with sunshine every time their paths cross, Logan finds his quest completely derailed. Who is truly responsible for his lost legacy, and will restoring the past satisfy if it means forfeiting a future with Evangeline? (Historical Romance from Bethany House [Baker])

Romantic Suspense:

Justice Betrayed by Patricia Bradley — It’s Elvis Week in Memphis, and homicide Detective Rachel Sloan isn’t sure her day could get any stranger when aging Elvis impersonator Vic Vegas asks to see her. But when he produces a photo of her murdered mother with four Elvis impersonators–one of whom had also been murdered soon after the photo was taken–she’s forced to reevaluate. When yet another person in the photo is murdered, Rachel suddenly has her hands full investigating three cases. Lieutenant Boone Callahan offers his help, but their checkered romantic past threatens to get in the way. Can they solve the cases before the murderer makes Rachel victim number four? (Romantic Suspense from Revell – A Division of Baker Publishing Group)

A Vast and Gracious Tide by Lisa Carter — After losing his closest friends and now his girlfriend to the ravages of war, Caden Wallis arrives on the Outer Banks for one final mission–to thank the woman who sent him a quilt while he was recuperating at Walter Reed Army Hospital. McKenna Dockery knows about loss. She juggles the family business, her ailing father, and an aging grandmother. Much to Caden’s surprise, she–not some elderly lady–is the quilter. The quilt was something she’d begun for her future husband but shipped to the military hospital after the tragic death of her fiancé. When a man is found snared in a net and murdered on McKenna’s property, she and Caden must work together to bring the killer to justice. (Romantic Suspense from Gilead Publishing)

Ransom of the Heart by Susan Page Davis — Police Captain Harvey Larson’s exhausting day takes a big detour when a teenaged girl approaches him at the diner, announcing that she is his daughter. When Harvey is on his way home from work a few hours later, his sister-in-law Abby calls him. She went to meet her husband for a dinner date and found a dead man on the floor at his place of business, and Peter has vanished. Harvey calls in his detectives and turns his car around. It’s going to be a long night, too. Once again, Harvey depends on his wits, his faith, and his squad, the Priority Unit, to solve a tough case and carry out Maine Justice. (Romantic Suspense from Tea Tin Press)

Speculative:

Song of Leira by Gillian Bronte Adams — Reeling from her disastrous foray into the Pit, Birdie, the young Songkeeper, retreats into the mountains. But in the war-torn north, kneeling on bloodstained battlefields to sing the souls of the dying to rest, her resolve to accept her calling is strengthened. Such evil cannot go unchallenged. Torn between oaths to protect the Underground runners and to rescue his friend from the slave camps, Ky Huntyr enlists Birdie’s aid. Their mission to free the captives unravels the horrifying thread connecting the legendary spring, Artair’s sword, and the slave camps. But the Takhran’s schemes are already in motion. Powerful singers have arisen to lead his army—singers who can shake the earth and master the sea—and monsters rampage across the land. As Leira falters on the verge of defeat, the Song bids her rise to battle, and the Songkeeper must answer. (Speculative High Fantasy from Enclave Publishing)

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Pamela S. Meyers: Pitching Your Novel at Festivals

Several years ago, just in time for my release called Love Finds You in Lake Geneva, Wisconsin (now released as Surprised by Love in Lake Geneva), a love story set in 1933, a new book festival called Beachside Authorfest located next to the beach in Lake Geneva began. What better way to promote my story than right there in the middle of its setting? A slam dunk for lots of sales. Right? Well, I did sell quite a few books, but a lot of people hardly gave the book a glance. The next year, I returned to the festival ready to step up my game and sold a lot more books in the process.

Being situated next to a walkway that leads to the beach, many of the of the passersby are intent on getting to the water. I write clean romances and women’s fiction, and I know my target audience is not teenage boys or most men. I learned it’s better to stand in front of my table and not sit or stand behind it. That way I can make eye contact with the women in the crowd as I hold my newest Lake Geneva book. I greet them and ask if they would enjoy an historical story set in Lake Geneva. If they pause and say yes, I quickly explain I’m the author of the book (which often surprises people) and that I grew up in Lake Geneva. That fact gives me credibility before I go on to describe what the book is about and how I spent hours in the library behind us, researching life in historical Lake Geneva. More times than not, a knowing expression crosses their face, and I know I’m about to make a sale. If they say they want to browse the other books and will come back later, I make sure to hand them a bookmark and point out the link to my Amazon author page printed on the back, adding they can order the book on Kindle if they prefer to read that way.

Of course, being at an event where my stories are set and being from the area helps, but I have used this method with good success at other book events where people are not familiar with the setting.

This coming July 14, I will again be at the Lake Geneva Authorfest under my blue canopy. This year, the book I’ll be holding as I make my pitch is Safe Refuge, the first in my three-book series about how the movers and shakers of 1871 Chicago quickly made Lake Geneva their home away from home after the Great Chicago Fire had destroyed their homes and businesses. They came to the pristine waters of Geneva Lake and built beautiful mansions on the lakeshore for their families to live in while the city was rebuilt.

Giveaway! If you want to read Safe Refuge, Pam is giving away a copy in either the Kindle version or trade paperback.

Leave a comment and describe your favorite beach read for this summer. I’ll put your name in the proverbial hat for a drawing that will take place June 6, 2018.

Blurb: In two days, wealthy Chicagoan, Anna Hartwell, will wed a man she loathes. She would refuse this arranged marriage to Lyman Millard, but the Bible clearly says she is to honor her parents, and Anna would do most anything to please her father–even leaving her teaching job at a mission school and marrying a man she doesn’t love. The Great Chicago Fire erupts, and Anna and her family escape with only the clothes on their backs and the wedding postponed. Father moves the family to Lake Geneva, Wisconsin, where Anna reconnects with Rory Quinn, a handsome immigrant who worked at the mission school. Realizing she is in love with Rory, Anna prepares to break the marriage arrangement with Lyman until she learns a dark family secret that changes her life forever.

Bio:

Pam has written most of her life, beginning with her first diary at age eight. Most of her novels are set in or near her hometown of Lake Geneva, Wisconsin. They include Surprised by Love in Lake Geneva, Wisconsin, and her newest release, Safe Refuge, the first of three novels in her Newport of the West series. Her novel, Second Chance Love, released last year, and her novella, If These Walls Could Talk, was published in the Coming Home collection. Future novels include Whatever is True (March 2019) and Shelter Cove and Tranquility Point, both part of her current series.

Pam resides in northern Illinois with her two rescue cats. She’s an hour or so away from her home town where she can often be found researching and nosing for new story ideas.

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Website: www.pamelasmeyers.com

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